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My Pepeha

Ko Au

Tena koe/korua/koutou

No Mt Albert ahau (my place/place from)

Ko Owairaka te kura (school)

Ko Mt Eden toku maunga (mountain)

Ko Oakley Creek toku awa (river)

Ko Shara toku mama (mother

Ko Habeba toku tuakana
(older sister of female/older brother of male)

Ko Atlantis  taku whanau (family name)

Ko Joseph taku ingoa (my first name)

Tena koutou, Tena koutou, Tena koutou katoa

(Greetings to you, greetings to you, greeting to you all)

WALT: add descriptive words to my writing.

Remember to:

• use your senses - what can you hear, see, smell, touch and taste
• add in similes and metaphors
• using feelings

Hi, I am a Lion king of the jungle. Today my mission is to defeat the Giraffe King of the Long Necks, his neck is as tall as a giant. They say that is impossible but it's not! I am as brave as a lion and as cunning as a fox. I am really nervous the grass is tickling my feet.I want to eat him and it's not that hard. Anyway let's get on with it

Clap! Clop! Clip! The stilts made a loud noise as I creped up behind him. The Giraffe smells like dinner and when he moves he sounds like he has already had mighty meal, making him extra fat and tasty. I can’t stop licking my lips.

OK, here is my plan. I will take a dive for giraffe when I am am close enough and if I don’t make it, I have to come up with a different plan.

Finally I am close enough, right next to the giraffe. I have to take a dive now. Here it goes. Donk! Ouch! I hit my head, that hurt. “Ha ha aha aha ha aha” the giraffe laughed and said “that was the silliest plan ever!”

Super Squirrel

Super Squirrel 

this is a story about a typical day in the life of a Super Squirrel!

Hello, I am Super Squirrel! I protect my tribe from the evil nut stealers. Today however, I will be in my home eating my favourite nut lollies and watching Tv.

On Tv I am watching the news. Holy nuts there was a big crime on Acorn Street. Someone stole all the nut in the bank. I felt a tingling feeling in my tummy and I had a suspicion that nut stealers were behind all this.

This was a job for Super Squirrel! I got my super cape. It was red like tomatoes and yellow like a banana. And yelled super power activate. In a split second I was in the air flying. This was mission impossible.

I flew into Acon Street. I went to the evil nut stealers house. I was right at the edge of a road when out of a dark hole an evil face popped up and said welcome to evil town and then disappeared! Ahhhhhhhhh ahhhhhhhhh. I slowly walked into the hole like a snail.  I saw a door half open. Aha! I said I got you now. I said with a good feeling in my tummy but I got no one was there. All I saw was a tree stump. I was confused. They were always here but tonight they had tricked me. I was so angry I smashed the tree stub with a little hit.

I got out of the hole and rushed to the bank with a nut gun as big as a tree stub. Everyone was running around screaming. Everyone was so happy to see me.  I asked the man in the counter and said, can I see the camera in the staff room. Ok he said was a happy look on his face.  Why was he smiling I said to myself.  He smiles like evil nut stealers 1. He was being suspicious.

into the staff room and looked at the camera in slow motion. I saw the counter man he was stealing the cash. I was so surprised.  I asked the counter man, hey I wonder who stole the cash? The counted man still pretended it wasn’t him.  I said let's just find out  and I quickly called 111. In half a second I saw the  cops with a man in the back seat. He came in the bank and said who called the cops? I did, I said was lots of happiness in my voice. The cops put the counter man in the back seat and drove off.

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Sun smart

On Monday Room 21 went to the beach and we where learning about how to stay safe in the sea.

Car race

This is my car race.

Camera shots.